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Harry Dry is my favorite copywriter.
He obsesses over brevity and clarity.
And leverages visuals to enhance both.
As Harry says:
โIf you have three noโs, youโve probably written a lot of rubbish. If you have three yesโs, youโre on to somethingโ
Letโs dive into each.
But first, hereโs an ad that does all three:

If they canโt visualize it, they wonโt remember it.
The more concrete and specific the visual, the better.
For example, most companies write copy like this:
You canโt visualize the first. The second is ambiguous. The third is too technical.
Here are better examples of each:

Can your words be proven to be true or false?
This weeds out meaningless copy like this:
Seriously, pause for a moment and ask what any of the above actually means in concrete terms.
They're actually completely meaningless statements.
To avoid this mistake, point to concrete facts and examples. Donโt just describe.
Letโs illustrate with an example:
Youโre setting up a date for your best guy friend. Most people say things like:
Those are all subjective descriptions that tell you nothing about him. Give that description to 10 people, and they'll all picture someone else.
But, instead, if you say:
Now they have a real idea of who this person is, what theyโd be like to be around, and whether they might be someone theyโd be interested in.
Just like Heinz can prove that people put competitorsโ ketchups in Heinz bottles:

Draw a line in the sand and say something unique to you
That makes someone buy your product instead of your competitors.
For example, in an old print ad, Volvo pointed out that their odometers have more numbers than everyone else:

Note: Volvo used โspeedometerโ because โodometerโ was an uncommon word at the time. They define it in the body copy.
Speaking of Volvos, Chevrolet points out that Corvettes are the fuel for countless songs (unlike basically any other car):

Keep rewriting until you get three yeses.
I highly recommend watching the entire interview with Harry Dry on How I Write.